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Company recruiter
When you fit a live posting at a mid-size or large company.
Direct, structured58 words
Subject
Ex-${prevCompany} ${roleType}, interested in ${role}
Email Templates
Cold Email Templates for Job Seekers
11 plain-text templates for reaching recruiters, hiring managers, peers, alumni, and leadership — backed by reply-rate research and designed to actually get replies.
Four principles
What makes a cold email work
These come from reply-rate research — Boomerang (40M emails), Lavender benchmarks, and interviewing.io's job-seeker data. Apply them to every template below.
50–125 words
Reply rates peak around 75 words. Above 200, they drop sharply.
Insight, not trivia
Referencing what they built lifts reply rates 2–3× over "I see you're at X."
One ask per email
Pick the smallest version of your ask. Multi-ask emails get triaged.
Attach your résumé
Recruiters need it to evaluate fit. Skip cover-letter speak in the body.
Subject line library
12 subject patterns that get opened
1–5 words, flat (not questions), specific. Lavender's cold-email teardown of ~500M emails found these patterns outperform clever or question-style subjects.
Recruiter
Ex-${prevCompany} eng, interested in ${role}
Recruiter
Re: ${role} application (${reqId})
Hiring manager
Re: ${role} on your team
Hiring manager
Application for ${role} — quick adds
Peer
Quick question — ${role} at ${company}
Peer
15 min to sanity-check the ${role} role?
Alumni
Fellow ${school} alum — quick ask
Alumni
${school} ${year} — quick question about ${company}
Leadership
${specificObservation} — re: ${role}
Leadership
One question on ${specificProductOrFocus}
Agency
${role} candidate — ${location} / ${workAuth}
Agency
Adding to your bench — ${specialtyOrIndustry}
Templates by contact type
Pick the right template for who you're emailing
Six contact types, each with a template tuned for that recipient. The first two — recruiter and hiring manager — also include an “after applying” variant for surfacing an application that's stuck in the queue.
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Hiring manager
When you can show specific work that maps to the team.
Peer-to-peer, humble72 words
Subject
Re: ${role} on your team
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Peer on the team
When you want team context — and possibly a referral later.
Soft, advice-first78 words
Subject
Quick question — ${role} at ${company}
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Alumni from your school
When the same-school tie gives you a warm in.
Warm, school-tie first62 words
Subject
Fellow ${school} alum — quick ask
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Senior leadership
When the company is small enough that the founder still cares about hiring.
Sharp, one-question48 words
Subject
${specificObservation} — re: ${role}
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Agency recruiter
When the role is niche, contract-heavy, or specialized.
Transactional, spec-first60 words
Subject
${role} candidate — ${location} / ${workAuth}
Follow-up sequence
The 3-touch sequence that recovers 55–70% of replies
Most replies come from follow-ups, not the first email (Yesware, Woodpecker). The trick is making each one add new value — never just “bumping this.”
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Day 3: Add value
Bring a new artifact — don't just bump.
Add value30 words
Subject
Re: [original subject]
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Day 7: Smaller ask
Reframe — "who should I talk to instead?"
Smaller ask41 words
Subject
Re: [original subject]
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Day 14: Breakup
Polite close — often triggers a reply via reciprocity.
Breakup38 words
Subject
Closing the loop — ${role}
The real unlock
One template won't get you replies — personalization will
Templates give you the structure, tone, and length. But reply-rate data is clear: insight personalization lifts reply rates 2–3× over surface personalization. The job-specific paragraph — the one that maps your background to this role at this company — is what separates a reply from being ignored.
That paragraph can't be templated. It has to be written fresh for every recipient, using the job description and your résumé as raw material. That's exactly what InTouch does at send: takes a template like the ones above, reads the job description and your résumé, and generates the personalized fit paragraph automatically — so you can send 30 well-targeted emails in the time it would take to write three by hand.
FAQs
Cold email questions, answered
How long should a cold email to a recruiter be?▾
Aim for 50–125 words. Reply-rate data from Boomerang (40M emails) and Lavender shows the sweet spot peaks around 75 words. Emails above 200 words see reply rates drop sharply — recruiters triage in seconds, and density beats length.
Should I attach my résumé to a cold email?▾
Yes. Recruiters need the résumé to evaluate fit, and InTouch recommends attaching it for outreach to recruiters and hiring managers. For peer and alumni outreach, lead with the message and offer the résumé only if the conversation moves forward.
How many follow-ups should I send before stopping?▾
Two to four total, spaced roughly 3 / 7 / 14 days. Across Yesware and Woodpecker datasets, 55–70% of replies come from follow-ups rather than the first email. Each follow-up must add new value — a fresh artifact, a smaller ask, or a polite breakup — never just "bumping this."
What's the best subject line for outreach to a recruiter?▾
Short, specific, and flat — not a question. Top performers are 1–5 words: credential + intent ("Ex-Stripe eng, interested in {role}") or referral-based ("Referred by {name}"). Avoid "Quick question?", "Hope you're well", or anything that reads like a sales sequence.
Is it better to email a recruiter or message on LinkedIn?▾
Email when you can find the address — deliverability is higher, the message is easier to write at length, and recruiters check email more deliberately than InMail. LinkedIn is the fallback if you can't find an email, or for warm intros where the existing connection matters.
Should I personalize each email or use a template?▾
Both. Use a template for the structure and tone — that's 70% of the work. But the opening line, the "why this role" line, and the specific reference must be personal to each recipient. Insight personalization (reacting to something they built) lifts reply rates 2–3× over surface trivia ("I see you're at X").
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